Josh shows us how to treat the reader with respect. The writing principles on display here combine to make the reader feel knowledgeable while they are learning. Sneaky!

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Today I looked at some writing by Josh Comeau:

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In my positivity pass on this article, I highlight a couple of principles that make it delightful:

• TONE - The audience is clearly articulated, and the choice of language and tone is pitched at the right level. The article respects the audience by assuming a level of knowledge.
• DIR - The author uses a combination of text and visuals to take you on a learning journey. The writing is linear in a satisfying way - it doesn’t leave any gaps.
• ILLUS, EXMPL - Great use of graphics and examples to help build understanding.
• JUDG, FUD - The article presents drawbacks and challenges, but always in a respectful way (not casting fear, uncertainty or doubt). This allows the author to present a comprehensive picture. Talking about the good side and bad side of a thing is best, and being able to talk about the downside without being negative is a skill we should all strive for.

🎉 Kudos to Josh for some great writing!

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